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Krystal the Starfox

A fresh release of Krystal POV :3

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    Lkynmbr24

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    Another nice animation of our favorite blue haired fox!

    Main criticism I would have is the voice though. The moans kind of sound a little too "stock" and fast paced. I think slower and more subtle moans tend to sound more natural in my opinion. The delivery of her dirty talk also doesn't sound very authentic. It sounds more like it's coming from someone acting a line out rather than someone actually enjoying being fucked. I think emphasizing those lines with a bit of a sultry "growl" of sorts can add a bit more emotion to the delivery of the dirty talk! Finally, it does good to attempt to imitate the character through their original lilts, accents and mannerisms. It usually never is a 100% match, and there definitely can be artistic freedom for this to make up for it, though it feels l'm more so listening to someone else having sex, not Krystal.

    Then again, I'm no VA expert on this so I'm not sure if my advice is really that sound, though it's just something that felt a little off to me about this animation. if my criticism doesn't seem constructive or helpful, feel free to downvote away, though I do mean well behind it. Again, this is a nice piece!

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