tesan said:
btw any feedback is welcome

Praise first: Lovely brushstrokes. That teardrop is quite beautifully curved. 🥲

I'll lay out some thoughts, okay? 👍
Okay, this is minor, but I am confused about the detached… whiskers, I suppose? It's a choice, but they do look a bit out of place here; initially thought those were motion lines.
You tackled a rather hard to draw pose (slouched shoulders, compressed chest) which is great and ambitious, but it does feel somewhat out of perspective.
Not sure whether you used some reference image, but the breasts would prolly be a bit squished. e.g. best reference I could find on such short notice. (NSFW obviously)
The cum covering her right eye is a tad messy (technique-wise, not content! 😅), and some of the head's shape is lost near the scalp. Could've been alleviated with shading.

All in all, 'tis quite good for a first post on here (if we don't count the sheet).
You've got that digital_painting feel going which, at least for me personally, is always a welcome sight. 😁

checkup said:
Praise first: Lovely brushstrokes. That teardrop is quite beautifully curved. 🥲

I'll lay out some thoughts, okay? 👍
Okay, this is minor, but I am confused about the detached… whiskers, I suppose? It's a choice, but they do look a bit out of place here; initially thought those were motion lines.
You tackled a rather hard to draw pose (slouched shoulders, compressed chest) which is great and ambitious, but it does feel somewhat out of perspective.
Not sure whether you used some reference image, but the breasts would prolly be a bit squished. e.g. best reference I could find on such short notice. (NSFW obviously)
The cum covering her right eye is a tad messy (technique-wise, not content! 😅), and some of the head's shape is lost near the scalp. Could've been alleviated with shading.

All in all, 'tis quite good for a first post on here (if we don't count the sheet).
You've got that digital_painting feel going which, at least for me personally, is always a welcome sight. 😁

thank you for the reply!, I'll keep it in mind on my next pieces. About the reference, I swear I tried to find something online but I just couldn't lol.

tesan said:
[…] I swear I tried to find something online but I just couldn't lol.

Yeah, don't worry about it. Truth be told, finding reference images is extremely difficult nowadays… decline of search engines, SEO spam, AI "ReVoLuTiOn”, etc.
Best advice I can give is to find and bookmark some pose photographers (or just HD porn lol) with poses you'd want to use. Maybe also give SketchDaily a try. 🤔

I like her expressions (on the other post as well) and it's a cute character design!